dhoop ne bhi mujhe itna nahi jalaya..
jitna ki yeh raat jalati hai..
tum jo apni bahoon ki garmi de do aakar
thaand mil jaayegi rooh ko..
sukoon aa jayega.
itna sanaata hai
apni aawaz bhi sunai deti nahi
tum jo apni aawaz ki ek boond de do aakar
aakhri saason par hai raat
bach jayeegi..........
ek bhi ordinary line nahi likh sakte?puri kavita extraordinary hai....
ReplyDeletewell gulzar wrote a similar poem.....but well done!!
ReplyDeleteawesome!!
ReplyDeletekya thoughts hain bhai...