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Thursday, May 17, 2007

Intezar

tere intezar mein

khwab jodta hoon
kabhi
khud bikhar jata hoon

aur kabhi
yun bhi hua hai
tumhari hi aarzoo mein
khud ko chhua hai

raat aati hai
mutthi se fisal jati hai
aur chaand bhi
roz badal jata hai

tere intezar mein
Poet

6 comments:

  1. UnknownThursday, May 17, 2007 at 4:48:00 PM GMT+5:30

    ekdam sateek kavitaa likhi hai Guruji!

    shirish

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  2. Manali_AainaThursday, May 17, 2007 at 10:29:00 PM GMT+5:30

    bahut hi achhe expressions hamesha ki tarah...keep writing

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  3. veer bhadra singhThursday, May 17, 2007 at 10:52:00 PM GMT+5:30

    bas aise hi udte hue halke lafzon ne to humein baandh rakha hai aapki in kavitaon se ....kitna sach aur itna saral

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  4. Kumar AnshulFriday, May 18, 2007 at 10:29:00 AM GMT+5:30

    Mood ko acchha pakda hai - aur kabhi yun bhi hua hai, tumhari hi aarzoo mein khud ko chhua hai.

    Lekin end kuchh halka lag raha hai, slightly cliched ....

    raat aati hai, mutthi se fisal jati hai; aur chaand bhi roz badal jata hai; tere intezar mein.

    1st and 2nd parts bahut acchhe hain. Agar kavita utane tak hi rehti, to?

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  5. Manish KumarMonday, June 4, 2007 at 12:55:00 PM GMT+5:30

    bahut sundar piyush luft aa gaya is kavita ko padh ke baut khhob

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  6. Alpana VermaSaturday, June 9, 2007 at 4:31:00 AM GMT+5:30

    chaan d bhee roj badal jaata hai,,
    Piyush ji --bahut khuub kaha aapne--kavita pasand aayee
    dhnyavaad

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