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Friday, May 4, 2007

Dye

वो पढ़ता था बहुत
मगर fail कर जाता था
घर और स्कूल
हर जगह
मार खाता था

घुटन और दहशत से
उस छोटे मन में
उस दिन
बड़ी बात आई
उसने लिख दिया कॉपी पर
'I want to dye'

पापा ने जब कॉपी देखी
थोड़ा दुख हुआ
और बहुत ग़ुस्सा आया
उन्होने उसे एक ज़ोर का
थप्पड़ लगाया

थोड़े थप्पड़ के ज़ोर से
थोड़ा पापा के दुख से
उसकी आँखें भर आईं
तभी कहा पापा ने-
"Idiot, Dont you know
the spelling of 'Die'!"

12 comments:

  1. Padh kar hothon pe hansi ki ek rekha aa gayi. Kavita safal hui, aisa laga mujhe.

    Bahut sundar.

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  2. Barson pahle yeh short story likhi thi. do din pahle hi ise poetic banane ki kshish ki thi. Magar ise padh kar agar hansi aati hai to yeh asafal ho gayee Kavita. hum bachchon ko unke nazariye se dekhte nahin..aur tabhi humein aisi baaton par hansi aati hai.

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  3. hmmm.......hansi to masoomiyat par bhi aati hai aur naa samjhi par bhi
    lekin idhar masoomiyat hai par naa samjhi nahin......
    so hansi aayi..... ab yeh safal to hui mere liye ...pata nahin aap ke liye asafal hui yaa safal

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  4. In 1st comment I just gave 3 dots...

    I was COMMENT LESS

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  5. तभी कहा पापा ने-
    "Idiot, Dont you know
    the spelling of 'Die'!"

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    Touched my hert bro.. after a long time.. BAHUUUUUUUUUUUUUT achcha LIKHA hai...

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  6. Waise sach bolun...
    This is not only abt childhood

    Ap jab bare hote ho tab bhi.. you have to face it..

    Aksar parents kabhi care nahi karte ke ap kya chahte ho.. And they feel they are doing best for you.. but kahin na kahin wo apne bachchon ki khusiyan kurbaan kar dete hain...

    EVEN WITHOUT THINKING ONCE.. ke what he/she wants....

    keep writing yaar

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  7. waise SAALE, KUTTE, KAMINE.. (aur galiyan nahi ati agar tere ko ati hai to de le khudko)

    mujhse bolta hai ke naya post karun to bata dun .. tu nahi bata sakta..

    waise likhne ko aise topics tujhe milte kahan se hain?

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  8. sateek, sunder aur bahut hee umda...kahani hai, kavita hai, satire hai...unique combination, bahut sunder Piyush...

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  9. poem bahut achi hai.
    Afroz ke liye kuch kehna chahungi bache jab bade ho jaye aur samjhne lagen ki acha acha aur bura hai unke liye to unhe apne parents ko ye samjhana chaiye. agar tab bhi hum apnikhushiyon ka gala ghont kar wo karen jo parents ke hisab se theek hai to khud ke sath na insafi hai. iska matlab ye nahi ki parents ko ignore karen per haan kisi ek ki khushi ke liye kisi aur i khushi na qurbaan hone den. agar bache sach me bade ho gaye to itna to unke hath me hota hai.
    koshish kar ke dekhna but make sure you are convinced ki jo aap chahte ho wo hi sahi hai...

    hey piyush... poem bahut achi hai. aisi poem aap jaise kavi ki kalam se aayen to aur bhi achi lagti hain

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  10. pahle kahani padhi thi aj kavita bhi padhi....maine kaha tha na log padhenge to dukhi hone ke bajay hansenge shayad...kyon ki ending kuch joke jaisa laga mujhe...yahan jo tu kahna chahta hai woh bhi clear hota hai magar maine jo kaha tha woh baat bhi hai...
    ek short story likhne ke baad use ek perfect kavita banana bahut hi mushkil hai....aur woh tune bahut hi asaani se kar dikhaya...great

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