raat jab
utre zameen par
aur aankhein do
dekhti hon khwaab
ek hi
chalo na
dhoondhein phir se
jismon ke darmiyan
panah ek
rooh ki
har baar....kuchh naya likhta hoon yahan...aur darta hoon ki log kya kahenge...is se bhi zyada darr is baat ka lagta hai ki kya hoga agar logon ne kuchh na kaha to!!
chalo na
ReplyDeletedhoondhein phir se
jismon ke darmiyan
panah ek
rooh ki
dil ko chuu gayi piyush bhai yeh panktiyan!!
bahut achche..likhte rahiye
Too good piyush. Kahan se aisi goodh bhaavnaayein itne saral shabdon mein utaar laate ho. bahut acche.
ReplyDeletejismon ke darmiyan panah ek rooh ki....
Sundar.
Its beautiful...
ReplyDeletekasam se kya likha hai... shabd nahi hai byan karne ko
"raat jab
ReplyDeleteutre zameen par
aur aankhein do
dekhti hon khwaab
ek hi"
Yahan pe "do aankhein" ek hi vyakti ki hain ya ek yugal ki? Agar yugal ki hain, to 'chaar aankhein" likhana kaisa rahe?
:-)
bahut sundar bhai.....itna accha likhte ho ki chahta hun.... woh rooh bhi simti kahin gum ho jaaye is panah mein bas...
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