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Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Ghazal

Tera mera kiska tha
Beet gaya woh jiska tha

Ab woh kiska kissa hai
Kal jo mera hissa tha

Dariya ko to paar kiya
Lekin aage sahra tha

Ek sapna jo yaad raha
Achha tha par mahnga tha

Mujhse aage kaun tha woh
Jab main sabse pahla tha

Mujh mein kachchapan tha sara
Tumko ek tajurba tha

9 comments:

  1. gazal kya hota yeh to pata nahi..

    jo bhi tha bahut achha hai..
    good one

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    i wud like to add confused wanderer ka comment bhi bahut achha tha

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  2. beautiful ghazal piyush....
    chhote beher ki iss ghazal ko badi khubsoorati se nibhaya hai aapne...
    abhinandan..

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  3. taareef mai jab aapki main yun hi sabkuch keh gaya
    mujhse ye dil kehne laga,baaki bahut kuch reh gaya.

    good gazal dost.keep it up.

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  4. beautiful thoughts combined in an uncommon manner...very nice... wish to read more....n...more often..

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  5. bahut badhiyaa likhaa hai aapne...wakai
    Badhayee sweekarein

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