Tera mera kiska tha
Beet gaya woh jiska tha
Ab woh kiska kissa hai
Kal jo mera hissa tha
Dariya ko to paar kiya
Lekin aage sahra tha
Ek sapna jo yaad raha
Achha tha par mahnga tha
Mujhse aage kaun tha woh
Jab main sabse pahla tha
Mujh mein kachchapan tha sara
Tumko ek tajurba tha
har baar....kuchh naya likhta hoon yahan...aur darta hoon ki log kya kahenge...is se bhi zyada darr is baat ka lagta hai ki kya hoga agar logon ne kuchh na kaha to!!
tumne ye jo likha hai,
ReplyDeleteKaun kahega pehla tha
gazal kya hota yeh to pata nahi..
ReplyDeletejo bhi tha bahut achha hai..
good one
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i wud like to add confused wanderer ka comment bhi bahut achha tha
beautiful ghazal piyush....
ReplyDeletechhote beher ki iss ghazal ko badi khubsoorati se nibhaya hai aapne...
abhinandan..
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ReplyDeletetaareef mai jab aapki main yun hi sabkuch keh gaya
ReplyDeletemujhse ye dil kehne laga,baaki bahut kuch reh gaya.
good gazal dost.keep it up.
wow...
ReplyDeleteReally wow!!
ReplyDeleteSuruwat to bahut hi dhasu hai
beautiful thoughts combined in an uncommon manner...very nice... wish to read more....n...more often..
ReplyDeletebahut badhiyaa likhaa hai aapne...wakai
ReplyDeleteBadhayee sweekarein