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Thursday, September 20, 2007

Khamoshi

baatein karte hue aksar
tum chup ho jaati ho
aur mujh tak
bas tumhari aati jaati saanson ki
aawaaz aati hai-
Ni-Re-Ga,Ni-Re-Sa
Raag yaman ke
aaroh-awaroh ki tarah

Tumhari khamoshi bhi kitni sureeli hai

5 comments:

  1. bahut hi umdaa....
    your standard is improving day by day...
    keep writing dear...

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  2. ajeeb saaz hai is poem mein........bahut khubsurat...poem likhne ke liye har kisam ke knowledge kaam aa jate hain...music ki bhi samajh hai tujhe isi liye itni achhi bani hai yeh kavita...keep writing

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  3. Ni-re-ga...Ni-re-sa

    Raag Yaman ka itni kaifiyat se istemal koi bahut achcha kavi hi kar sakta hai.

    Sandhya kaal ka raag hai, aur aapki kavita me bhi kisi chup-chaap si shaam ka aabhas milta hai...bahut sundar

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  4. ese hi likh-likh ke jaan le lo...

    Kya likha hai..."Jaanaleva"

    aawaaz aati hai-
    Ni-Re-Ga,Ni-Re-Sa
    Raag yaman ke
    aaroh-awaroh ki tarah


    Khubsurat...

    bhai 'Raag Desh' me.n bhi kuch sunaao...!! :D :D

    with love
    ..masto...

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