baatein karte hue aksar
tum chup ho jaati ho
aur mujh tak
bas tumhari aati jaati saanson ki
aawaaz aati hai-
Ni-Re-Ga,Ni-Re-Sa
Raag yaman ke
aaroh-awaroh ki tarah
Tumhari khamoshi bhi kitni sureeli hai
har baar....kuchh naya likhta hoon yahan...aur darta hoon ki log kya kahenge...is se bhi zyada darr is baat ka lagta hai ki kya hoga agar logon ne kuchh na kaha to!!
bahut hi umdaa....
ReplyDeleteyour standard is improving day by day...
keep writing dear...
ajeeb saaz hai is poem mein........bahut khubsurat...poem likhne ke liye har kisam ke knowledge kaam aa jate hain...music ki bhi samajh hai tujhe isi liye itni achhi bani hai yeh kavita...keep writing
ReplyDeleteNi-re-ga...Ni-re-sa
ReplyDeleteRaag Yaman ka itni kaifiyat se istemal koi bahut achcha kavi hi kar sakta hai.
Sandhya kaal ka raag hai, aur aapki kavita me bhi kisi chup-chaap si shaam ka aabhas milta hai...bahut sundar
ese hi likh-likh ke jaan le lo...
ReplyDeleteKya likha hai..."Jaanaleva"
aawaaz aati hai-
Ni-Re-Ga,Ni-Re-Sa
Raag yaman ke
aaroh-awaroh ki tarah
Khubsurat...
bhai 'Raag Desh' me.n bhi kuch sunaao...!! :D :D
with love
..masto...
bohut khoob!!
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