sitaare-sayyaron se bante hain rishte
magar mera taara kuchh toota hua hai
khuda maan kar maine to ki butparasti
magar pathhar bhi mujhse rootha hua hai
sweater ki tarah buna tha jo rishta
ek dhaaga kahin uska chhoota hua hai
har baar....kuchh naya likhta hoon yahan...aur darta hoon ki log kya kahenge...is se bhi zyada darr is baat ka lagta hai ki kya hoga agar logon ne kuchh na kaha to!!
"magar mera taara kuchh toota hua hai"
ReplyDeleteyeh baat to achhi lagi mujhe...kuch bhi maanga ja sakta hai...aur last 2 lines...
sweater ki tarah buna tha jo rishta
ek dhaaga kahin uska chhoota hua hai
kya likha hai...kavi ki kalpana bhi kitni khubsurat hoti hai...bahut hi achhi kavita hai...aur tu kisi mood mein kavita likh sakta hai...aur yeh shairana mood banaye rakhna...
kaa ho kul to tu likh dela...ab hum kaa likhin........
ReplyDeletejai bihar.....
jokes apart very nice poem ......
keep it up
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