main bhatakta hoon is zameen par kab se
sarhadein milti hain
Vatan nahin milta
Vatan mein shahar, shahar mein
Apni galiyan dhoondhta hoon
ki unhi galiyon mein
kahin ek ghar hai mera
aur
bujhti saanson ki tarah
jab bujhta hai sooraj
bhatakta hoon
jism mein kabhi
rooh mein tere
yeh kaun si zameen ki
talash hai mujhko
ki
panah-e-aasman bhi
nahin milta
har baar....kuchh naya likhta hoon yahan...aur darta hoon ki log kya kahenge...is se bhi zyada darr is baat ka lagta hai ki kya hoga agar logon ne kuchh na kaha to!!
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ReplyDeletejaise bade bade poets ke poems ko hum alag alag interpretations dete hain waise hi lagta hai is poem ko har ek insaan alag tarike se interpret kar sakta hai..jitni baar padhti hoon kuch alag feeling hoti hai.
ReplyDeletebujhti saanson ki tarah
jab bujhta hai sooraj
bhatakta hoon
jism mein kabhi
rooh mein tere...
yeh padhke lagta hai ke ek zindagi ki akhri saans suraj ke dhal jane ke saath bujh gayi aur raat ki god mein ek aur zindagi saans leni shuru kar di...
shayad kavine kuch aur socha hoga...par pathak bahut kuch soch sakta hai.
Piyush ab shayad tujhe pata chal gaya hoga kyon comment nahin de pa rahi thi...
i don wana repeat d things dat u r a nice,sensitive n above al big thinker.i lik ur way of dealin wid the situations wchrreally against ur wishes.But y always i feel lik ur loneliness along wid ur creations r makin u mor helpless n makin u hard to forget ur past wch otherwise u can try to forget....i don know dat if it wud hurt u to answer dis but surely i need an answer....gudluck otherwise.....
ReplyDeleteths so much like;
ReplyDelete'main quaynat mein sayyaron mein'
thoughts r very b'ful,nd also well bound,
but everytime i read it,it reminds me of gulzar saab's lines
i try to part both creat'ns but...
poetry is written undoubtedly in a very gud manner[no need to say tht]