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Monday, May 12, 2008

Alfaaz

har subah
tumhaari sureeli aawaaz se jagna..
aur saare din
ek ek lafz ko
kaanon mein yun chhupa ke rakhna
ke jaise aathwan sur ho koi...

aur narm narm
halke se
kuchh lafz woh hain
jo utar jaate hain dil mein
gudgudi sa karte hue saare din..
aur honthon pe mere
muskuraate rahte hain


aur bheega bheega
chhalka sa
ek lafz woh bhi
jo chhu jaaye dard jab
aankhon mein utar aata hai
lab nahin hilte magar
aankhon se ada ho jata hai...

tumhaari aawaaz ke
rang hain kitne...
saare din
mujhe kitne hi rangon mein
rang jaate hain
ek utarta nahin
aur kitne hi rangne ko
chupke se chale aate hain!!
Poet

14 comments:

  1. AbhijitMonday, May 12, 2008 at 10:53:00 AM GMT+5:30

    Classic Piyush....sahaj saral shabdo me anubhutiyon ki tasveer. Jo sirf mehsoos kiya karte hain, un ahsaason ko aap bakhubi lafzo me dhaal dete hain aur yahi aapka strong point hai

    Bahut sundar

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  2. कुशMonday, May 12, 2008 at 1:53:00 PM GMT+5:30

    बहुत अच्छे पीयूष.. सुंदर रचना.. सहज़ शब्दो में गहन भाव.. बढ़िया

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  3. Amit RanjanMonday, May 12, 2008 at 8:05:00 PM GMT+5:30

    so simple yet so beautiful :o)

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  4. Amit RanjanMonday, May 12, 2008 at 8:08:00 PM GMT+5:30

    lekin ye bata kahan milegi aisi ladki .. poems mein hi milti hai bas :D

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  5. VoiceTuesday, May 13, 2008 at 12:21:00 PM GMT+5:30

    amit ki tarah main bhi utshuk hu yeh janane k liye aisi larki milegi kaha :)

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  6. ArchitTuesday, May 13, 2008 at 12:55:00 PM GMT+5:30

    hmmmm..

    acchi hai..

    din ki tulna..apne aap se...!!

    simplicity is best wid u.

    keep it up..!!


    ram ram

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  7. vikasgoyalTuesday, May 13, 2008 at 2:08:00 PM GMT+5:30

    bahut sundar, bahut hi achha khayal... aur bahut sundar prastuti...mazaa aa gaya

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  8. Saee_KTuesday, May 13, 2008 at 3:02:00 PM GMT+5:30

    aapki style hi niraali hai fir bhi..bahut 'Gulzaarish' hai..

    ek ek lafz ko
    kaanon mein yun chhupa ke rakhna
    ke jaise aathwan sur ho koi...

    amazing...yeh shayad aap hi soch sakte hai...bahut khoobsoorat...

    likhte rahe..

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  9. GeeTuesday, May 13, 2008 at 3:17:00 PM GMT+5:30

    गुलज़ार साहब के गाने " एक ही ख्वाब कई बार देखा है मैने" की झलक पाई इस कविता मे ....बहुत खूब....Vintage Piyush

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  10. Shilpa BhardwajTuesday, May 13, 2008 at 5:17:00 PM GMT+5:30

    ek ek lafz ko
    kaanon mein yun chhupa ke rakhna

    Sundar hai Piyush... bahot din baad ..tumhare waali baat dikhi mujhe tumhari poem me... keep writing.

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  11. Kumar AnshulThursday, May 15, 2008 at 1:58:00 AM GMT+5:30

    Bahut hi seedhi, saral aur chhoo jaane waali kavita. Good one, piyush.

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  12. KedarThursday, May 15, 2008 at 12:51:00 PM GMT+5:30

    excellent piyush......

    bahot acchhe shabd
    khubsoorat bhaav

    aankho se ada ho jati hai...

    vry nice .....

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  13. UnknownSaturday, May 24, 2008 at 2:21:00 PM GMT+5:30

    As usuall Brilliant lines..Piyush bhai. dil ko choo gaya..maza aa gaya:)

    Jiyo..!

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  14. Shilpa BhardwajFriday, November 27, 2009 at 5:50:00 AM GMT+5:30

    Accha hai, piyush...lage raho... :)

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