lamhe todein waqt se
chalo raat ko jod lein
tare bhar lein daaman mein
aur chandni odh lein
raat ka sira bandhein
aur chaand ko thaam lein
guftagu chale sadiyon tak
badan ko zubaan dein
aiweinhi rooth jaayein
phir saanson se tewar utaar dein
aanch se jab pighalne lage
rooh ke zevar utaar dein
smooth flowing river this one....sab accha laga,bas last para mein aiwehee bahut casual tha,kuch aur word istemaal kar sakte they...par acchi bani hai overall...
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