Main jo chala tha ghar se
tumne potli mein ek
zara sa kuchh diya tha
kaha jab bhookh lage kha lena
aaj bhi woh potli
yun hi padi hai
tujhse door hoon na
Maa!! bhookh nahin lagti
har baar....kuchh naya likhta hoon yahan...aur darta hoon ki log kya kahenge...is se bhi zyada darr is baat ka lagta hai ki kya hoga agar logon ne kuchh na kaha to!!
sach hai yaar.........
ReplyDeleteab bhook nahin lagti ....nahin ruko lagti hai maa ke pyaar ki...........
so touching yaar.....
lovely....
Acchha hai, piyush. Climax mein punch acchha aaya hai.
ReplyDeletejab kavi ko apna favourite topic mil jaye to aur kya chahiye....pathak ko......
ReplyDeletebahut hi khoobsoorat likha hai...
ReplyDeletemaa ka woh kona..
chhu liya tumne...
incredible
ReplyDeletePyaara likha hai...
ReplyDeletekhubsurat...
marvelous!!!!
ReplyDeleteshaandar..amazing very nice yar..
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