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Sunday, July 29, 2007

door

Main jo chala tha ghar se
tumne potli mein ek
zara sa kuchh diya tha
kaha jab bhookh lage kha lena
aaj bhi woh potli
yun hi padi hai

tujhse door hoon na
Maa!! bhookh nahin lagti

8 comments:

  1. sach hai yaar.........
    ab bhook nahin lagti ....nahin ruko lagti hai maa ke pyaar ki...........

    so touching yaar.....
    lovely....

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  2. Acchha hai, piyush. Climax mein punch acchha aaya hai.

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  3. jab kavi ko apna favourite topic mil jaye to aur kya chahiye....pathak ko......

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  4. bahut hi khoobsoorat likha hai...
    maa ka woh kona..
    chhu liya tumne...

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