har baar....kuchh naya likhta hoon yahan...aur darta hoon ki log kya kahenge...is se bhi zyada darr is baat ka lagta hai ki kya hoga agar logon ne kuchh na kaha to!!
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Sunday, July 29, 2007
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Main jo chala tha ghar se tumne potli mein ek zara sa kuchh diya tha kaha jab bhookh lage kha lena aaj bhi woh potli yun hi padi hai
sach hai yaar.........
ReplyDeleteab bhook nahin lagti ....nahin ruko lagti hai maa ke pyaar ki...........
so touching yaar.....
lovely....
Acchha hai, piyush. Climax mein punch acchha aaya hai.
ReplyDeletejab kavi ko apna favourite topic mil jaye to aur kya chahiye....pathak ko......
ReplyDeletebahut hi khoobsoorat likha hai...
ReplyDeletemaa ka woh kona..
chhu liya tumne...
incredible
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ReplyDeletekhubsurat...
marvelous!!!!
ReplyDeleteshaandar..amazing very nice yar..
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