raaste chalte hi jate hain
aur manzil ka faasla
kuchh itna hai
ki arbon mein ginoon
to bhi kam padein
pahuncha hoon aaj jab
to jaana hai
deewaar hai ek
sheeshe ki
ki main chaand ko
dekh sakta hoon
mil nahin sakta
har baar....kuchh naya likhta hoon yahan...aur darta hoon ki log kya kahenge...is se bhi zyada darr is baat ka lagta hai ki kya hoga agar logon ne kuchh na kaha to!!
.....bhai bahut accha likha hai....keep it up
ReplyDeleteyeh faasle bhi mit jaayenge tassalli se koshish to karo...
ek sheeshe ki deewaar se dar gaye...
is manzil ko paane ko to aag kaa dariya bhi paar karna pade to gum nahin......
moti chunne ke liye to samandar mein utarna hi padta hai...door se dekh kar khush nahin hua jaata...
tum bas koshish to karo.......hahahaha
Dissapointment ke "end" tak pahunchne ka safar kaafi stressed hone se, us "end" ke "means" bakhoobi justify ho rahe hai...
ReplyDeleteSpace tourism ka serious iraada hai lagta tumhara...chand ko nahi cchodoge....;)
"wo ki khusbu ki tarha faila tha mere chaarsu
ReplyDeleteMain use mehsus kar sakta tha..chu sakta na tha"
ye bhi bandhi hui hai...so khubsurat hai...
han yu hi nuktaa_chinii kar raha hu...flow thoda kam kare to kaisa ho ?ye dekho..
:::...
aaj jab
Pahucha hu..
to jaana...
ek deewaar hai..
Sheeshe ki..
...
Main chaand ko..
dekh sakta hu...
..mil nahi saktaa..
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